Wednesday, May 21, 2014

review: Innocent in Los Vegas



 Innocent in Las Vegas by A.R. Winters                      

I have to say this book was a good book. I rated it actually 2.5 stars for the following reasons...
Well, I got this book from the publisher in exchange for an honest review..

reason 1.) this book is just like the Stephanie Plum series, I am sorry to burst anyone's bubble but it is let me break it down for you....

2.) this girl lost her job, is working as a P.I. ( props to you for not making her a bounty hunter.) 3.)she is fat and loves to binge eat. ( sounds oddly the same as another book?)
4.) she has a grandmother who acts like a teenager and is involved in all the gossip. WAIT!!! did i mention this grandmother also lives at home with their children..... ( wow i am getting similar..)
5.) she has a mother who wants her to get a real job and get married. ( this mother will also tell her that other woman doesn't do what she does...)
6.) when she is on her first case, she get caught up in some bad situations that leave people wanting to kill her...


well, I finished the book and i have to tell you that if you even picked up at least one Janet Evanovich book then you know what happens

my final thought:
PLEASE WHEN YOU MAKE A SECOND BOOK THAT YOU GET YOUR OWN IDEAS... here i will help you

start by making your MC a skinny pretty lady who has a job, and helps a friend.. for once why can't we have a fun mother? or why cant the MC be married already? see! its not that hard! i hate people who copy other people.. ( OH! and don't tell me because the names and job titles are changed that it is not copying...)

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